More comments about Kelly's critique service:
"Wow! I can’t thank you enough. Your critique was just what I needed as a new writer. Not only did you deliver the critique when promised, but it went beyond my expectations. Your suggestions encouraged me to work on the weaknesses in my manuscript, while also further embracing the strengths.
I continue to refer back to the critique as I restructure my story, as well as employ the help of the writer’s resources you mentioned. It’s given me renewed energy and focus to make my manuscript many times better. Kudos! In me, you’ve earned a repeat customer and a agent of referral."
- E. Maddred
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Editorial Services
Want feedback on your picture book manuscript?
Kelly offers critiques. Submissions must be double-spaced and spell-checked. Kelly will give feedback on areas such as character, structure, plot and voice.
Here's what two writers had to say:
"Kelly, thank you so much for your critique!. I didn't know what to expect when I solicited your editorial services. To be honest, I was more than impressed when I received your feedback.Your very professional and thorough critique of my manuscript was awesome. It allowed me to look more critically at my piece and hone in on some very important parts of the story's structure. Also, the added benefit of the the tip sheet and the list of publishers who may best match my work was certainly more than I could ask for. The entire process was seamless and invaluable. Highly recommended."
-- C. Nelson
"Kelly Starling Lyons really helped me to zero in on the problematic parts of my manuscript. I needed someone to check its focus, rhythmic meter, and overall use of appropriate language for a young reader. Ms. Lyons delivered a detailed, thought-provoking account of how to make language come alive in the truest sense of the word. Her helpful commentary has inspired me to pursue new children’s book manuscript ideas."
-- B. Whiteman
Critiques are $50. Turnaround time is three weeks.
Please contact Kelly for more information.